I am learning to use a plan to organise my ideas for writing.
I will be successful when:
- I can plan my ideas before I write
- I use quick pictures and words
- my writing shows the ideas and details from my plan

Planning is good for my learning. I can get better at writing some words correctly.
Well done Esmond, there is lots of detail here for you to write an interesting story. I like the way you used quick pictures and words that you'd like to use. Keep trying to talk about and reflect on your writing. Mrs Templeton 10.04.16