- use a plan to help me record 3-4 ideas on a topic
- use capital letters and full stops correctly
- use Wordart to record words and phrases that describe ME!
- My name is Esmond. I am seven years old. My birthday is on the 15th of January.I live with my family, one dad and mum and my two brothers. I have fifty cousins. I come from Cambodia and I live in New Zealand. I’m mostly from New Zealand now.I hate nightmares and the food I hate is mushrooms.When I grow up, I want to be a scientist so I can learn about everything.The things I like are fruit and vegetables and playing on my computer.By Esmond Nop
- I can write longer stories, I got more ideas. I used lots of words in the wordart. I think its now more interesting.
Sunday, April 8, 2018
Writing
This term I have been learning to:
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Writing over several days has really helped you to extend your story and add lots of information. I think you will make an amazing scientist Esmond. Keep trying hard to talk about your writing to help you tell others about what you are trying to work on.
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