Describing a Setting

This term I have been learning to describe a setting.
Success Criteria:

• use describing words
• use language features e.g. alliteration, similes
• hook the reader by using my senses e.g. see, hear, feel etc

The sun was bright like a flaming ball.  The trees were waving in the wind and blustering the clouds away.  The mountain is as rocky as an erupting volcano and the grass 
is flat like paper.  The water falls off each step in a cascade.

Reflection:  It was hard for me to think of some ideas.  I think I used some good words like
blustering and cascade